And it was so.
''Embedded'' deep,
Those roots sown curling in carnal fervour.
But with self-indulgent lust wandering off in places,
Just like a lazy pollen seed in breeze.
Your want wavers, but
''Only occasionaly so my ''love'' ''
I twisted and squirmed in deaths discomfort,
As your definiton of 'immortal' words
Oozed, from your fragmented jaw and tri-boned head.
Promises you planted, In the form of a flower,
The perfext Orchid,
Just for me.
Didn't you know though?
Time reshapes everything,
Including your minds warehouse.
Faithfulness grows bored after a time.
And what follows,
Is only what is to be.
So don't you know?
The red eyed picture will be discarded.
I'll be a distant figment of the past, I'll be
The forgotten Lily, drooping her head in misery.
The bitter Rose, thornier than ever known.
The common Daisy, too average to be treasured.
So don't wait on the miracle that isn't coming,
And uproot your lie.
Uproot the seemingly immortal 'Perfect Orchid'
I know its secret anyway.
Because I know it's only a cheap, plastic replica
Of all your fantasy deemed reality.
And I know Spring doesn't last 5 years,
Just waiting for you, to bloom.















Comments
I don't know ''cheap, plastic replica'' still doesn't sound good to me. I wanted to change it when I was writing this, but I was rushing to get to work
I'm glad you liked the idea I was trying to convey though, so thank you
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''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.
....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
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"The day I stop dreaming is the day I die" - Soichiro Honda
Yeah trust is not the only thing you need for a relationship to work, but it is definitely one of the most important things needed
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''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.
....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
Once I find out what all the other ingredients are, I will write a book and make a fortune out of it
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"The day I stop dreaming is the day I die" - Soichiro Honda
Hmm.. the other ingredients....
They can't be that hard to figure out can they?
But if you do make a fortune from that book, I'm going to hatch a very crazy and wonderful plan to steal all your money in the dead of the night, and then use it to pay all the great Finnish bands so they will play a private concert for me!!!
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''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.
....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
As for this poem, you sent me to the bloody dictionary. I absolutely love that. The wording and the way you twist it is spectacular in this. Adore it.
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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
Thanks for your words on the poem. As always, it means alot to me coming from you
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''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.
....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
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"The world we perceive through our senses could be an elaborate hoax. "
René Descartes
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