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And it was so.
''Embedded'' deep,
Those roots sown curling in carnal fervour.
But with self-indulgent lust wandering off in places,
Just like a lazy pollen seed in breeze.
Your want wavers, but
''Only occasionaly so my ''love'' ''
I twisted and squirmed in deaths discomfort,
As your definiton of 'immortal' words
Oozed, from your fragmented jaw and tri-boned head.

Promises you planted, In the form of a flower,
The perfext Orchid,
Just for me.

Didn't you know though?
Time reshapes everything,
Including your minds warehouse.
Faithfulness grows bored after a time.
And what follows,
Is only what is to be.

So don't you know?
The red eyed picture will be discarded.
I'll be a distant figment of the past, I'll be
The forgotten Lily, drooping her head in misery.
The bitter Rose, thornier than ever known.
The common Daisy, too average to be treasured.

So don't wait on the miracle that isn't coming,
And uproot your lie.
Uproot the seemingly immortal 'Perfect Orchid'
I know its secret anyway.

Because I know it's only a cheap, plastic replica
Of all your fantasy deemed reality.
And I know Spring doesn't last 5 years,
Just waiting for you, to bloom.
©2006-2010 ~Orphelia-Anduril
:iconorphelia-anduril:

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Falsehoods.

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:icondemonrobber:
Some relationships are based on lies and they have no chance of surviving. When there is no trust all is lost. We know deep down that things had potetial to be great so it hurts all the more when things go wrong. Well-expressed, I liked the image of the Perfect Orchid and eventually it turns out to be "a cheap, plastic replica". Sometimes that is the way with love. An excellent read.
:iconorphelia-anduril:
Thank you. You're completely right about the relationship thing. They just can't work without trust.

I don't know ''cheap, plastic replica'' still doesn't sound good to me. I wanted to change it when I was writing this, but I was rushing to get to work :|
I'm glad you liked the idea I was trying to convey though, so thank you :) :hug:

--
''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.

....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
:iconc4ym4n:
I like it, well done :clap: It made me think of my own passed relationships. I'm sure trust is not the only ingredient needed, although it's probably the most essential.

--
"The day I stop dreaming is the day I die" - Soichiro Honda
:iconorphelia-anduril:
Thank you :hug: I'm so sorry if I made you uncomfortable or anything though :(

Yeah trust is not the only thing you need for a relationship to work, but it is definitely one of the most important things needed :)

--
''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.

....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
:iconc4ym4n:
No, you didn't make me feel uncomfortable at all, you silly little thing =P
:hug:
Once I find out what all the other ingredients are, I will write a book and make a fortune out of it :D

--
"The day I stop dreaming is the day I die" - Soichiro Honda
:iconorphelia-anduril:
Oh ok, that's good :) I would hate to make ya feel bad!

Hmm.. the other ingredients....
They can't be that hard to figure out can they? :worry:

But if you do make a fortune from that book, I'm going to hatch a very crazy and wonderful plan to steal all your money in the dead of the night, and then use it to pay all the great Finnish bands so they will play a private concert for me!!! :mwahaha:

--
''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.

....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
:iconglarawen:
You were right, I guess the time came sooner than I thought. I'm reading again... though not a lot. And have written something. I guess we'll see if it's any good or not.

As for this poem, you sent me to the bloody dictionary. I absolutely love that. The wording and the way you twist it is spectacular in this. Adore it.

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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
:iconorphelia-anduril:
Everything will be just fine, I can promise you that. I know it can be so weird, that you can feel so much and then suddenly feel so little without even understanding why. But wisdom comes with everyday, and basically it's the simple acceptance of things. I think realism is something that evades all of us regularly, especially when we're young and everything is heightened because we're experiencing and discovering so many differents emotions and relationships. But it settles itself eventually. Sometimes all you need to remember is that the first cut is always the most painful, and the longest healing. Everything that follows is easier and keeps getting easier... I can honestly say that's the truth :hug: You'll be fine :)

Thanks for your words on the poem. As always, it means alot to me coming from you :)

--
''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.

....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
:iconriyllan:
Hey :heart:

--
"The world we perceive through our senses could be an elaborate hoax. "
René Descartes

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