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This is necessary.

This saves me.

Just a shred, the most minute piece.
All rose coloured - imperfection - Rising...

Striving to hide all the uneven flow.

Just a thought, the smallest flicker.
That if I could, I would...
If I could have vivacity through mentality,
I would use it.

(This is necessary - This saves me)

It's just a drop,
But it's a colossus of a splatter -

Spacing and gaining on reality,
Reality is outside of me.
Instead I find it all in mind
Knowing-
That if I were valuable,
All of this,

Would not be necessary.
©2007-2009 ~Orphelia-Anduril
:iconorphelia-anduril:

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I'm off ta bed! Work at 9 and I'm bloody WRECKED outta me head. Just wanted to do this first. It doesn 't feel finished, but I'll sort it out once I'm not so tired lol.

Love to all, x

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:iconc4ym4n:
Interesting title. How it's not finished? I think it's good :)

--
"The day I stop dreaming is the day I die" - Soichiro Honda
:iconorphelia-anduril:
Aw thank you :hug:

The title came from the sort of ''embrace'' I'm having with myself in the '' poem'' (lol). Obviously if it's between me and me, it's not all nice hugs and kisses(!), hence it's vicious :)

Well I don't think it's finished because I just didn't feel that satisfied with it when I posted it. But I did feel the need to write and post something at the time, so I settled with it. But only temporarily lol.

Miss you *cuddles*

--
''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.

....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
:iconscarlette-shadows:
Yes i also agree with C4ym4n, it's good, and I also don't see how it's not finished. I really like your work! I'll be looking forward to any new pieces! =]
:iconorphelia-anduril:
Aw thanks sweetie :)

I just feel like it's lacking something... I don't think I captured what I was trying portray very well...

But if two people think otherwise, that's cool :D

Thankies for the fave on it too :hug:

--
''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.

....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
:iconscarlette-shadows:
Ah no prob, i feel the same way about Tell me, i love the chorus, but i want to totally gut everything else, but people have told me otherwise, so once i can figure out new verses, i'll post it and see which one people like the most!
:iconorphelia-anduril:
Do. It's always best to get feedback before making your mind up. Who knows how it'll be received!

Actually, give us a kick there to remind me to go back through your gallery and leave comments. I keep forgetting to do it. Silly moi.

I won't get a chance until Sunday though, working all day tomorrow and then having my fake birthday tomorrow night. Woot! :dance: :boogie: :beer: :headbang: :)

--
''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.

....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
:iconscarlette-shadows:
Oh well it's not nessecary! But hope you have fun with your "fake birthday"
:iconorphelia-anduril:
I did :) It was nice, actually it was kick ass. Except for last night. My friend Alan abandoned me in the middle of the night! I'm so angry at him... But a nice Australian guy helped me out!

--
''Fanaticism is a matter of climate'' - Hitler.
''A bone heals, a bruise fades, but art, is, FOREVER'' - Otep.

....And I stuck my fingers into the sockets of the decayed .... and called it art...
... Forgive me.... please ...
:iconscarlette-shadows:
Ah yes, Australian guys are very good for that. And they have awesome accents. It's going to be kind of funny to hear my brother with one when he comes home at Christmas!

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